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The sun is drowning in the sky
As the moon swims by
Won’t stop to pick her up
Too proud to lend a hand
Fallen angels streak their smoky tails
Rushing to her aid
But it’s too late
The moon is always watching
Face turned towards her fate
And still she waits
But if the sun would die
She too would disappear
Never to shine the brightest
As she hopes
Jealousy could kill her light
But still she waits…
As the moon swims by
Won’t stop to pick her up
Too proud to lend a hand
Fallen angels streak their smoky tails
Rushing to her aid
But it’s too late
The moon is always watching
Face turned towards her fate
And still she waits
But if the sun would die
She too would disappear
Never to shine the brightest
As she hopes
Jealousy could kill her light
But still she waits…
thanks to 
for the beautiful drowning sun and 
for the moon brushes 
for the beautiful drowning sun and for the moon brushes © 2006 - 2024 Ailoura-aithe
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Wow! Just as beautiful as that amazing preview! Perfect gorgeous symbolism, given a great description in brilliant detail. I just fell in love with the imagery. You ended it wonderfully too, defiantly held my full attention. A very powerful insightful mesmerising piece. I truly enjoyed reading this.
'the sun drowning'
moon swimming
beautifully use of personification as such.
fantastic-write!
'the sun drowning'
moon swimming
beautifully use of personification as such.
fantastic-write!